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Elizabeth Kate Switaj
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Read my latest story, "The All-Nighter", at 52|250. FujisanI always said I climbed alone seems logical enough and I didn’t alone the woman who ran the abandoned foxes & wings & formless over treeline so I could cheer the sun to rise Possibly Related Classroom Projects From
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Your poems take me another plane.
tale of two toes
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Thank you.
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This is no lie! I especially love these lines:
over treeline
they lifted boulders
lifted feet
and finally lifted clouds
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Paul Oakley
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The way I looked at it was that if the statements in the poem weren’t a lie then what “I always said” had to be.
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Spiritually uplifting and written in a sparse style that fits the context.
irene’s last blog ..an elephant in the closet
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I’m glad you found it uplifting.
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Very spiritual and transcendent piece. If you are inventing here, it is only in the physical sense, not the inner one.
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I like the way you put that. Thank you.
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This is really beautiful. The photo is lovely too.
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Thank you!
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living in the rocky Mountains I certainly can relate…spirituality of the mountains..indeed UP..lifting..i enjoyed this and thanks for sharing
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thanks
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finely tuned journey…very nice
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Thanks!
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The confession of ‘I am not alone’ is beautiful, especially when described on so many nuanced levels.
Deb’s last blog ..poems don’t have an expiration date around here
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Thank you!
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I like how the poem starts with a discussion of “alone” and ends with a vision of 100,000 lives. I like the word “alone” alone on its own line. You took great care with your line breaks, indentations, and spacing.
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Thank you. The temporary bond that formed among people climbing the mountain (and there are a lot in the summer) was one of the many interesting aspects of the climb. Though when I wrote about those many lives I was actually thinking more of reincarnation than of present living beings, I think this way of looking at it is a happy accident!
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