9 Responses to “Thursday Read Write Poem”

1. gautami tripathy on October 15th, 2009 at 4:05 pm

   Your poems make so much sense to me. I like the way you go differently.. exulting mixture Like or Dislike: 1  0 Reply

2. Linda Fraser on October 15th, 2009 at 4:24 pm

   I know I live among exploded people. Some of us only partial exploded and many of us who enjoy writing poetry. Your point of view is interesting. I enjoyed the frankness of your words and the hard hitting quality. Thank you for sharing this work, Elizabeth. I really liked it. =D Linda Fraser’s last blog ..READ, WRITE PROMPT #96-SPAM. SPAM. SPAM Like or Dislike: 1  0 Reply

3. Paul Oakley on October 15th, 2009 at 5:56 pm

   I love the word ululation, that attack mode of celebration or clebratory mode of attack sounded forth by women on the ridge of the hill or dune since time immemorial. “Cosmoramic ululations of the present” takes time-immemorialness and makes it specific and universal at the same time. Nice! Paul Oakley’s last blog ..Beatitudes Like or Dislike: 1  0 Reply

4. Therese Broderick on October 15th, 2009 at 7:47 pm

   “blood & capricious metals kill my kin” what great lines, and how true this poem is very powerful and effective, capturing my sympathies Therese Broderick’s last blog ..ReadWritePoem #96 Like or Dislike: 1  0 Reply

5. david moolten on October 16th, 2009 at 12:07 am

   Good use of the words, and you added a great and appropriate one in ‘ululation’. Great image of the shaking hand, with its simpler diction and rhyme with understand. david moolten’s last blog ..Le Juif En Vert Like or Dislike: 1  0 Reply

6. EKSwitaj on October 16th, 2009 at 11:38 am

   Thanks everyone! Like or Dislike: 0  0 Reply

7. Derrick on October 16th, 2009 at 4:58 pm

   I enjoyed this too; especially those two first words! Derrick’s last blog ..Newcastle, Again. Like or Dislike: 0  0 Reply

8. wayne on October 16th, 2009 at 7:08 pm

   nicely done and thanks for sharing Like or Dislike: 0  0 Reply

9. Zouxzoux on October 17th, 2009 at 5:32 am

   “you could live among exploded people who do not think like you” And don’t we all, everyday? BTW – I really like your other blog. It’s similar in content to a group blog I administer. Thanks for stopping by Zouxzoux. Zouxzoux’s last blog ..ReadWritePoem #96: Spam Like or Dislike: 0  0 Reply

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