Comments on: Thursday Read Write Poem http://blog.elizabethkateswitaj.net/2009/10/thursday-read-write-poem-9/ Elizabeth Kate Switaj Sun, 07 Mar 2010 00:35:49 +0000 hourly 1 By: Zouxzoux http://blog.elizabethkateswitaj.net/2009/10/thursday-read-write-poem-9/comment-page-1/#comment-19438 Zouxzoux Fri, 06 Nov 2009 18:36:27 +0000 http://blog.elizabethkateswitaj.net/?p=1725#comment-19438 Takes me back to the county fair as a kid. Love it! .-= Zouxzoux's last blog ..<a href="http://zouxzoux.wordpress.com/2009/11/05/rwp-chance-encounter/" rel="nofollow">RWP: Chance Encounter</a> =-. Takes me back to the county fair as a kid. Love it!
Zouxzoux’s last blog ..RWP: Chance Encounter

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]]> By: EKSwitaj http://blog.elizabethkateswitaj.net/2009/10/thursday-read-write-poem-9/comment-page-1/#comment-19419 EKSwitaj Thu, 05 Nov 2009 16:03:11 +0000 http://blog.elizabethkateswitaj.net/?p=1725#comment-19419 Thank you everyone! Thank you everyone!

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]]> By: Barbara http://blog.elizabethkateswitaj.net/2009/10/thursday-read-write-poem-9/comment-page-1/#comment-19391 Barbara Fri, 30 Oct 2009 21:36:25 +0000 http://blog.elizabethkateswitaj.net/?p=1725#comment-19391 The contradiction makes the point well: which isn't the point I've about concluded that we're always either too old or too young .-= Barbara's last blog ..<a href="http://briarcat.wordpress.com/2009/10/28/bad-bad-b_a_d-poem/" rel="nofollow">Bad, bad b_a_d poem</a> =-. The contradiction makes the point well: which isn’t the point
I’ve about concluded that we’re always either too old or too young
Barbara’s last blog ..Bad, bad b_a_d poem

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]]> By: Therese Broderick http://blog.elizabethkateswitaj.net/2009/10/thursday-read-write-poem-9/comment-page-1/#comment-19386 Therese Broderick Fri, 30 Oct 2009 14:25:11 +0000 http://blog.elizabethkateswitaj.net/?p=1725#comment-19386 I appreciate the sentiment of this poem -- thank you for a poem that expresses a feeling of loss for deceased parents. You tell us so much about love with the single line about the mother's concern for her child's safety. Perhaps the speaker of this poem misses not only the deceased, but also her own childhood which is also gone forever. .-= Therese Broderick's last blog ..<a href="http://theresebroderick.wordpress.com/2009/10/28/readwritepoem-98/" rel="nofollow">ReadWritePoem #97 (re-do)</a> =-. I appreciate the sentiment of this poem — thank you for a poem that expresses a feeling of loss for deceased parents. You tell us so much about love with the single line about the mother’s concern for her child’s safety. Perhaps the speaker of this poem misses not only the deceased, but also her own childhood which is also gone forever.
Therese Broderick’s last blog ..ReadWritePoem #97 (re-do)

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]]> By: irene http://blog.elizabethkateswitaj.net/2009/10/thursday-read-write-poem-9/comment-page-1/#comment-19383 irene Fri, 30 Oct 2009 02:18:57 +0000 http://blog.elizabethkateswitaj.net/?p=1725#comment-19383 but our parents aren't here half of them are dead which isn't the point A trip to a fair that turns into a childhood memory and jerks between past and present and somehow the fireworks blur into the erasure of memory so the incomplete 'to'...like your technique here, Elizabeth. .-= irene's last blog ..<a href="http://enerihot.wordpress.com/2009/10/29/you-spin-me/" rel="nofollow">you spin me</a> =-. but our parents aren’t here
half of them are dead
which isn’t the point

A trip to a fair that turns into a childhood memory and jerks between past and present and somehow the fireworks blur into the erasure of memory so the incomplete ‘to’…like your technique here, Elizabeth.
irene’s last blog ..you spin me

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